Post by Deleted on May 23, 2018 15:40:06 GMT -6
Keplers Inharax: Altered enough to be acceptable for the RP, but requires additional information in regards to weapons. While I can assume that the Great Shadow Sword is a Protosteel blade that channels Inharax's elemental power, I am not so sure as to what the Twilight Shield does or is. Please edit to include small descriptions about the weapons.
Mirok: Suitable for the RP, love the name. The lack of specifics in regards to what he'll use in humanoid form does concern me however as Destral's arsenal could contain almost anything. Could you be more specific in this area? Like is it just generic weaponry, random weapons associated with the canon Brotherhood, do the weapons he grab tend to have their own powers, etc.?
@gamewolf Vortaxx: He is really similar to his counterparts, a bit too similar. Please provide a list of differences between this Vortaxx and the other ones.
If you can prove that he has enough changes to qualify, then could you be slightly more specific as to the weapons he could access? Are they only Xia-originated weapons, his own designs, etc.? And I need a better explanation as to the compartment thing as the wording with the other Kanoka armor powers makes it a bit unclear. So, it's a piece of technology that activates modified Kanoka right? Separate from the rest of the armor? Where is it located? And do the other parts of his armor have this as well? If not, I would suggest having them in place given that Kanoka's power runs out after being used so much. Would be a lot better than having to make new armor every time and could allow for different power usage. Of course, there would need to be posts for that and updates for the profile if the character does.
Rezok: Insufficient data, old profiles or list of difference required. Kanoka tech does not include the Hau as of yet for this RP.
Rocketracer7235 Strontis: Name not recognized, presumed to be new character. If not a new character, please provide previous profiles or list of differences, otherwise he's good to go. I take it he isn't with the Toa Alliance?
@ar9914 Devoix: Sufficiently different, character is approved.
Terracore: Breaks Rule 8, " Characters and items/weapons can only have one element," and as such is denied as long as he has such a feature.
Voidarix: Incomplete profile, must be finished in order to be reviewed.
@marshalcody113 Kolokvar: Extremely similar to older counterpart, just barely qualifies. List of differences required to help ease the minds of others.
Mystus Caedian: New character, nothing wrong noted with the profile, he is approved. It will be fun seeing him
Terakha: Extremely similar to older counterpart, but does qualify. List of difference to help ease the minds of others requested.
Viperax: Too similar to older counterpart, changes required or a list of differences to justify. Explanation of weapon/equipment required.
Talin: Just sufficient enough to qualify. Though it's a Nobel Komau, not a Great one.
Seregon: Not different enough, almost word for word exactly the same as previous version. Denied.
Mordyr: Missing information for comparison, please provide old profile or list of differences. Linking the Wiki page does not count as showing old profile as it is incomplete.
Kyessia: Qualifies as being different enough, is approved for RP use.
Odirion: Possible new character, requires information on Powers, Weapons, Abilities, etc. If he has none, it must be listed as such.
Oxley: Powers and weapons information is missing and required.
Old Fusaman: Powers and Weapons information is required.
Sorba: Assumed to be a new character; approved. She'll be a fun one.